Thursday, January 31, 2013
Introduction practice entry
In the beginning I should have introduced myself ,since I didn't I will now. My name is Sabrina Gonzalez I am 18 years old and attending school at Glendale Community College. I have no idea of what I want to do with my life. In high school I took many different electives ;such as, cooking, engineering, art, sculpting art, and ROTC. I still have no idea of what I want to do for the rest of my life ,but I have high hopes. I am also a Christian and I attend Catalyst Church every Sunday. I have family and friends that attend with me. This is mostly what you need to know about me.
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Sabrina--It is good that you have some content up here. You have a few ideas mentioned, but you don't really discuss much in detail. You need to spend more time working to engage your reader. Create significance in your writing. Think about how and what you can write that will interest your audience. Also, think about the visual appeal of your blog more. You just have black text in a white box. No images. No videos. Expand. Develop. Connect.
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